Basic
Essay Structure: Introductory and Concluding Paragraphs
Research Findings and Implications
In analyzing 600 compositions
from nonnative English writers, Kaplan,
(1966) noted that the paragraph development of these writers
followed different organizational formats depending on their
language background. One research study has shown that Deaf
writers have some basic knowledge of discourse rules but apply
them in writing less frequently than hearing writers (Marschark,
Mouradian, & Halas, 1994). However, both Deaf writers and
nonnative English writers with basic writing skills need to
be specifically taught how paragraphs and essays are expected
to be developed and constructed.
Ball (1991) reported that African
American students typically prefer to use different organizational
patterns for academic writing tasks than the organizational
patterns American mainstream teachers expect and reward. Therefore,
teachers with basic writers from diverse cultural backgrounds
should also directly teach about the organizational structure
expected.
Livingston
(1989) studied the revision strategies of Deaf writers and
found that teachers tended to ask Deaf writers for more information
and indicated the need for additions and elaborations following
their first drafts. In addition, Deaf writers were able to improve
their initial drafts with subsequent revisions although the
revisions seemed to be focused on grammar. Thus, Livingston
suggested that teachers form their questions on students' drafts
by looking at the writing from a whole (that is, discourse-based
instead of sentence specific) especially during the initial
drafts.
Bienvenu (1993),
Bienvenu and Colonomos (1989), and Roy (1989) described the structure of
an ASL lecture or presentation. Deaf students may follow this
type of structure when writing their early drafts in English.
One researcher (St. Clair, 1980) found that the written compositions
of Native American students also used structures influenced
by features of their culture's rules for storytelling or public
speaking. For deaf students who use ASL, directly teaching an
awareness of the ASL structure and contrasting it with the written
English structure may be helpful.