Action
Steps
SPECIFIC ACTIVITIES
1. In writing assignments, you can encourage
students to keep the topic of an essay in the subject position
as much as possible (Robinson, 2000). Then, if students make
structural errors with the verbs, you can discuss with them
which subjects should have passive verbs. This will provide
students with authentic practice in both context and structure
of passive voice sentences.
2. In course assignments, you can increase students
exposure to passive voice structures by incorporating them into
exercises in ways where they might naturally appear and where
their meaning is absolutely clear.
An example would be a guided-sentence exercise in which students
must first find correct information needed to complete passive
voice sentences and then rewrite the completed sentences in
their notebooks. Here is a social studies example.
Directions: Complete the following
sentences by writing the name of the correct inventor in each
of the spaces below. Then rewrite the complete sentences neatly
in your notebook.
A. The first effective polio
vaccine was developed by
B. The first artificial heart was built by
C. The telephone was invented by
D. The windshield wiper was invented by
If the students find the correct information,
then the sentences in their notebooks should look like these:
A. The first effective polio
vaccine was developed by Jonas Salk.
B. The first artificial heart was built by Robert Jarvik.
C. The telephone was invented by Alexander G. Bell.
D. The windshield wiper was invented by Mary Anderson.
With this kind of exercise, students have the
opportunity to learn content while producing copious amounts
of correct passive voice sentences with expressed agents in
appropriate contexts.
3. For reinforcing the distinction between active
and passive, you can develop inductive exercises related to
specific assignments that force students to choose between active
and passive sentences. For example, an exercise related to John
Boormans The Emerald Forest by Robert Holdstock (1985)
might contain contrasts like these:
Directions: Choose a statement
from each pair that describes correctly the events that occurred
in Part 2 of The Emerald Forest. Only one statement
from each pair is correct.
A. Mr. Markham drove
to work every day in a Jeep Rover.
B. Mr. Markham was driven to work
every day in a Jeep Rover.
A. The police called
after little Tommy had disappeared from the construction site.
B. The police were called after
little Tommy had disappeared from the construction site.
A. At the Greys Landing
Mission, Mr. Markham asked about
an Indian tribe called the Invisible People.
B. At the Greys Landing Mission, Mr. Markham was
asked about an Indian tribe called the Invisible People.
A. At the Greys Landing mission, the Indians taught
Christian religion and Portuguese language.
B. At the Greys Landing mission, the Indians were
taught Christian religion and Portuguese language.
A. During the night, the Fierce People attacked.
B. During the night, the Fierce People were
attacked.
4. Ronald
V. White (1978), in his article "Teaching the Passive,"
writes that the passive voice is often treated as a transformation
exercise, the student being required to rewrite active statements
as passive ones. The result can be a confusion of forms, with
a combination of elements which are neither active nor passive.
He further asserts that an important function of the passive
voice construction, as a means of describing a sequentially
ordered process, may not be obvious to the student as a result
of such practice exercises (p. 188).
White suggests exposing students to descriptions
of industrial and agricultural production processes from beginning
to end. In such instances, writers naturally tend to use passive
voice to keep the product in the subject position of a sentence
while adding the new information in the remaining part of the
sentence. For example:
Tuna are
caught in large nets.
Then they are transported to a cannery.
Then they are offloaded onto conveyors.
And then they are cleaned.
After that, they are washed.
etc.
White suggests several accompanying activities
such as multiple readings, answering questions, and the creation
of flow-charts in order to help students to focus on form, content,
and flow of information.
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