Writing Best Practices

The proliferation of screens has made web writing tips relevant in pretty much all media. As such, we have put together Marketing and Communications Writing Best Practices that serve as a guide for ALL writers throughout RIT as they develop copy for a range of uses.

Editorial Guidelines

Campus communicators should use these best practices as a guide along with RIT’s Editorial Guidelines when creating copy for RIT.

Make Copy Scanable

You may spend hours carefully crafting your content, but the sad truth is that most readers spend just 15 seconds of their time reading webpages, brochures, fliers, ads, and other marketing materials.. Web and mobile users in particular don’t always read words from left to right, but rather they scan the page looking for phrases or keywords that capture their attention.

This is why it’s vital to make your writing scannable:

  • Use bullets and short, concise phasing to get your points across.
  • For instructions, use key language like “Step 1, Step 2, etc.” that make it easy for a reader to follow steps
  • On webpages use link to other sources (if applicable). In most instances, a short phrase will do. But sometimes readers want more or we want to direct them to specific content. Give it to them by linking to a full source (webpage, a news article, a program page, etc.)
  • Strategically use headlines and subheads to break content into easily digestible chunks.

Write with the End in Mind

Before you begin crafting content, determine the goal of your web page/website. Do you want your visitors to do something, such as apply for admission? Do you want them to seek more information? Be clear about how you are using your site so you can craft an appropriate content strategy.

These guidelines are based on industry benchmarks to help you write compelling content that visitors will actually read, and ultimately take the action you want them to take during the precious moments they spend on your site. Using best practices for writing for the web will result in:

  • Lower bounce rate (the percentage of instances that people immediately leave your page after arriving there)
  • Higher click-through-rate
  • Increased authority/credibility
  • Longer dwell time
  • Better readability

Search Engine Optimization

Search Engine Optimization (SEO) is the practice of increasing the quantity and quality of traffic to your website through organic search engine results.

SEO is nuanced and strategic. And, perhaps more importantly, always changing. RIT’s Division of Marketing and Communications works with an SEO platform called BrightEdge. This tool provides valuable data on keywords, search volume, and opportunities to improve SEO performance on webpages. The Division of Marketing and Communications has a skilled team of writers who, along with the departments of Marketing Intelligence and Web Services, work together to execute an SEO strategy across RIT’s web presence. We welcome collaboration and the opportunity to work with you to reach your SEO goals.

Website Page Titles

Titles should match the page content, and should be neither too narrow nor too broad.

  • Avoid acronyms in title pages – no one outside of RIT understands our abbreviations, so let’s leave them out
  • Titles should be short.
  • Never use periods or exclamation points.
  • Do not use “a”, “an”, or “the” as the first word (e.g., Economy of the Second Empire, not The Economy of the Second Empire), unless by convention it is an inseparable part of a name (e.g., The Hague).

Compelling Copy: Keep it Clear, Simple, and Concise

Attention spans are short on the web, and even shorter on mobile devices. Your website content should be easy to read.

  • Choose words that are simple and familiar to your audience.
  • Be concise: Don’t use 10 words when five can convey your message clearly.
  • Eliminate exclamation points and other punctuation that convey strong feelings or high volume.
  • Get to the point and eliminate extraneous copy.

Examples

Good

The professional studies program is specifically designed to enable students to create an individualized plan of graduate study tailored to their personal and professional goals. (25 words)

 

Better

In the MS in professional studies, students create a personal plan of study tailored to their professional goals. (18 words)

Civil engineering technology makes many people think of hard hats, but construction is only one of many job opportunities available in this field. Solving challenges posed by the environment is a hot field in today’s civil engineering technology landscape. Civil engineering technology graduates restore polluted rivers as well as century-old bridges, design public parks accessible to people with disabilities, construct roadwork in isolated areas, design water delivery systems....you name it! (71 words)

Solving challenges posed by the environment is of critical importance. Civil engineering technology professionals restore polluted rivers, rehabilitate century-old bridges, design public parks that are accessible to people with disabilities, construct roadwork in isolated areas, design safe water delivery systems, and more. (42 words)

Support Claims with Facts, or Leave Them Out

Don’t make generalizations without providing context or factual information to support your claims.

Examples

Claim

The Kate Gleason College of Engineering at RIT is the nation’s premier career-oriented college of engineering.

 

Claim supported by facts

Ranked No. XX nationally by the Princeton Review, RIT’s Kate Gleason College of Engineering is among the best engineering colleges in the nation.

With one of the oldest and largest cooperative education programs, RIT offers you full-time, real-world working experience before you graduate.

Leading national college guides have consistently ranked RIT as a leader in experiential education. Princeton Review cited RIT as one of 50 colleges in the 2017 edition of Colleges That Create Futures: 50 Schools That Launch Careers by Going Beyond the Classroom. U.S. News & World Report ranked RIT among 20 universities recognized for excellent cooperative learning and internship programs.

Bites, Snacks, Meals

The best way to attack web writing is to offer bites, snacks, and meals (in that order).

Bite

Powerful headlines that draw attention.

New RoboBee Flies, Dives, and Swims

Snack

Concise summary of your content in one to two sentences.

Hybrid robot could perform search and rescue missions, research studies, environmental monitoring

Meal

The full content of your message presented in a scan-friendly manner (or linked to, depending on your website design).

Full content RoboBee news story.

Website Scan-Friendly Text

Reading and scanning behaviors are different online. Research strongly illustrates that people scan web pages and phone screens. They rarely read content word for word.

  • Highlight keywords (But be careful not to overdo it—overemphasizing dilutes the impact of your message.)
  • Use meaningful subheadings (not clever ones). They act as the informal outline of the page.
  • Said another way, topload important information. Start with the content most important to your audience, then provide additional details.
  • Cut the word count in half whenever possible.
  • Focus on one idea per paragraph. Readers will skip over any additional ideas if they are not caught by the first few words in the paragraph.
  • Use the inverted pyramid style of writing. Tell the reader the conclusion, results, or outcomes first, followed by the most important supporting information, and ending with the background.
  • Use bullet points for optimal readability.

Keep Your Audience Top of Mind

Your audience may enter your website from any page, and move between pages at will. It’s best to create content for each page that is independent of other pages. Don’t assume a user will go through your site in a linear manner (e.g., homepage, college page, department page). Also, don’t make assumptions about how your audience has arrived at your website.

Visit the Audience section of the brand portal or the Copy Playbook for more information on how to write for our specific audiences.

Consider Your Voice and Style

Active vs. Passive Voice

Always write in active voice. It’s more exciting and tends to be less wordy.
Active voice: The lion attacked the village.
Passive voice: The village was attacked by the lion.

Examples

Passive Voice

Students can be assisted by College of Health Sciences and Technology faculty and academic advising staff if they need help with a personal problem that may impact academic performance, or need to discuss curriculum or a wide range of potential career choices and options.

 

Active Voice

Faculty and academic advising staff in the College of Health Sciences and Technology are available to assist students in understanding program requirements and addressing curriculum questions, discussing personal issues impacting academic performance, or exploring a range of career choices and options.

Avoid Jargon

The outside world has little interest in, or understanding of, our internal organizational structure. They don’t know what CIMS, CET, or MAGIC mean. Avoid jargon and acronyms whenever possible. Depending on the age and geography of your audience, slang and idioms have varying degrees of familiarity. Content must appeal to the widest audience possible.

Examples

Jargon/Acronyms

In addition, my involvement in the SHPE at RIT chapter enabled me to extend my professional network and provided me with promising opportunities.

 

Clearer Text

In addition, my involvement in RIT’s Society of Hispanic Engineers enabled me to extend my professional network and provided me with promising opportunities.

Seek Out Correct Information

There are a multitude of places where you can confirm details about RIT. Correct information is crucial to presenting a strong RIT brand and an accurate narrative about the university.

Use Correct Titles for Departments, Majors, Etc.

When referencing academic programs (majors and options), academic departments, colleges, schools, or administrative departments, always use correct titles.

Linking

Hyperlinks and links to PDFs can provide meaningful information to a reader who is seeking more in-depth knowledge of a topic. Using hyperlinks should be strategic and thoughtful.

  • Hyperlinks should explicitly describe what users can expect to find when they click on the link. Use the name of the website the link goes to.
  • Short, concise link titles are best. Links should not exceed 60 characters.
  • Do not use URLs as link text.
  • Avoid using click here. Visually impaired visitors often use auditory browsers, which will read the text aloud rather than display it visually so the link should be meaningful when read out of context.
  • Links to PDFs should use the title of the PDF as the hyperlink.

Examples

Incorrect

Annual program enrollment and degrees awarded information can be found here.

 

Correct

Learn more about Annual Enrollment and Degrees Awarded.

The nomination form is now available and accepting submissions.